Tuesday, August 9, 2011

What do you think of this intro paragraph?

It was the life he lived, a life he loved. He loved her, and her, and both were stolen from him. He tried to recover those loves, to rescue their present for the future. Yet what was stolen from him, his loves and his life, was destroyed in the proverbial blink of an eye. He was destroyed, for now. Until he could avenge this past, their love and his life, he might never live in the future; which is now…

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